I found it hard to find something positive,thought and helpful in this person's blog post but I still managed to write something good about their post.
Next time I should read the instructions to and activity I come across to.
My name is Fiona and I’m from the Summer Learning Journey.
Great work on commenting on Houston’s blog. I like the way you introduced yourself, then let Houston know what you like about his blog. These are great ways to comment so ka pai! It’s also great that you asked a question in your comment, as this could start a comment thread (where you reply to one and other), which is a great way for you to form connections with other student bloggers.
All comments that are positive, thoughtful or helpful will receive bonus points so remember to submit a link to your published comment using this using this form. .
Keep up the great work, I can’t wait to read more of your summer posts soon! Ngā mihi nui, Fiona
Hi Iosefo, Reflections are always hard and so too are comments. Read carefully what you are going to comment on and when you comment on a way of improving something, you just have to think about what challenged you in your understanding of what they had done, was it the language you didn't understand, was it the speed of the slides moving or the colour or type of font they used? We are always good at giving positive comments but sometimes its hard to give feedback to help improve someone. Keep it up Iosefo.
Kia ora Losefo,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Fiona and I’m from the Summer Learning Journey.
Great work on commenting on Houston’s blog. I like the way you introduced yourself, then let Houston know what you like about his blog. These are great ways to comment so ka pai! It’s also great that you asked a question in your comment, as this could start a comment thread (where you reply to one and other), which is a great way for you to form connections with other student bloggers.
All comments that are positive, thoughtful or helpful will receive bonus points so remember to submit a link to your published comment using this using this form. .
Keep up the great work, I can’t wait to read more of your summer posts soon!
Ngā mihi nui,
Fiona
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ReplyDeleteHi Iosefo,
DeleteI deleted the post because I spelt your name wrong at the beginning of my post. So I deleted it and redid the whole post.
Hi Iosefo,
ReplyDeleteReflections are always hard and so too are comments. Read carefully what you are going to comment on and when you comment on a way of improving something, you just have to think about what challenged you in your understanding of what they had done, was it the language you didn't understand, was it the speed of the slides moving or the colour or type of font they used? We are always good at giving positive comments but sometimes its hard to give feedback to help improve someone. Keep it up Iosefo.