Planet Foofoo
At home we were sleeping and some ugly
squiggly aliens took us from our home.
squiggly aliens took us from our home.
Our eyes were shut and when we opened
our eyes we saw a lovely planet called Planet Foo
Foo!It was the best! It had lots of food and video
game lots of tents and bunk beds to sleep on.
When we trapped in a cage we saw a blue flying
lamborghini outside then we saw a golden key
lying down on the floor then D.J picked it
up and tried to unlock ourselves.Then we as
driving to look for a machine and we’ll I was driving
D.J got the rocket launchers and he shot every alien.
That's how we got a victory royale,to be continued
.Then I found the richest machine and cleaned it
,it was so clean that it turned into gold.Then we
to rob the bank and we had 1,000 trillion
diamonds thanks to Kaulave so we went to
buy all the stuff in the jewellery shop but we still
had billions of diamonds left.Then the police
chased us so I was riding the devel 16 because
the devel 16 is faster than a lamborghini .When
we escaped we went back home and set up the
wifi and the ps4,ps5,ps100,ps1,000 and the
pcmac.Then we had a lovely day and the
aliens weren't chasing us anymore.Then we
played games on our devices.The end.
our eyes we saw a lovely planet called Planet Foo
Foo!It was the best! It had lots of food and video
game lots of tents and bunk beds to sleep on.
When we trapped in a cage we saw a blue flying
lamborghini outside then we saw a golden key
lying down on the floor then D.J picked it
up and tried to unlock ourselves.Then we as
driving to look for a machine and we’ll I was driving
D.J got the rocket launchers and he shot every alien.
That's how we got a victory royale,to be continued
.Then I found the richest machine and cleaned it
,it was so clean that it turned into gold.Then we
to rob the bank and we had 1,000 trillion
diamonds thanks to Kaulave so we went to
buy all the stuff in the jewellery shop but we still
had billions of diamonds left.Then the police
chased us so I was riding the devel 16 because
the devel 16 is faster than a lamborghini .When
we escaped we went back home and set up the
wifi and the ps4,ps5,ps100,ps1,000 and the
pcmac.Then we had a lovely day and the
aliens weren't chasing us anymore.Then we
played games on our devices.The end.
I am proud of the writing I did and adding
games in like fortnite.
games in like fortnite.
Talofa Losefo, I am Iroam from Red Hill School. I like the way that you described the aliens and thinking about putting the aliens in your story the most scary part was when the aliens took you away I like the way that you thought of a planet and you made a long story.
ReplyDeletehi my name is Fred I am from stpatrick school. I like your writing about aliens kidnapping you it is cool. but your writing is off the page.
ReplyDeleteKia ora Losefo, my name is Susana from Redhill School. I really like your post about Planet Foo Foo. Next time maybe could you make the letters a little bit smaller. Did you know if you press ctlr v it will make your typing fit the page and thank you for sharing.
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